Feedback needed on Asian brothers

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Teabrows
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Feedback needed on Asian brothers

Post by Teabrows » 09-05-2011 15:17

So yeah I want feedback on my Hong Kong. This is first time ever rping him and I want to have some advice on how to improve in along with things I do well.

This is the topic I'm talking about http://hetaliarp.forum2go.nl/an-usual-day-t191.html
“My eyebrows make a more profound impact on other people than they do on me. I just let 'em grow.”.


Main rp character: England and France
Minor rp character: Prussia, Canada.
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Mirlin
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Post by Mirlin » 09-05-2011 15:23

and some comment for China wouldn't be wrong too 8D I notice that I get out of character a lot of times... D8
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